While I have your attention…………..I’d like some feedback on a couple of ads!
I’m planning to run a couple of ads in magazines in the near future, and I wanted to run these by you to see if you had any helpful feedback. The ads are pretty much done, so I’m not looking for utterly different approaches. I just want to make sure there aren’t any typos or if there are any minor text changes that would make a meaningful difference. Please email me if you have any thoughts!
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